Those days i would never forget – i din’t sleep for two days. And we got late for class and our presentations were cancelled. My lecturers were really angry.
BUT today i got my lec’s feedback,nicely here it says:
Imaging point of View: Clear, Impactful, Effective
Imaging component comments: “Progress can be seen in such a large scale in a short 7 days! what leap from the conceptual and ideation. I am really happy to see each scene coming together and so very clearly communicated. That said, that it did you time to decide and lock down on the story. The process of getting to the real root/ truth of the story really paid off. Well done.”
Sound point of view: interesting panels comparison to story telling. The narrative is well explain in the panels. Good flow of story transitions between panels.
Sound component comments: very good sound esign and music compositions. It works very well with the panels. Effects shoul have been replaced with your existing voice rather than using the programmable ones. It would bring your work a notch higher.
I’m on cloud nine. All the hard work has been worth it
The book of 1John(bible) always amaze me. One of the quotes is 1 john 4:18
There is no fear in love, true love has no room to fear.
Because where fear is , there is pain.
And he who is not free from fear is not completely in love.
Today, i will input more sound effects into it.
etc environment sound.
for the audio , i remove most of the groove and take the sustain sound to suits my art.
as you can see… many bars are muted.
the girl was amazed of the world knowing through internet.
she longs to go to these places.
she hates the pollution there. sky is always dark and dim, water is dirty, factories everywhere, and the the place is crowded.
The smoke behind is actually a Chinese painting.
in her school , she has been bully by others, This is an international school.
the building behind is an english high school in Shanghai.
Actually i also edit the face of the girl, making her sad even more.
as you can see, her bag comes with her since the first piece, and the bag tell us she is getting older.
the girl wanted to do more art but his parent disagree to let her do. They want her to go working in the bank. they have different mind -could not communicate.
girl did not have her parent attention. staying alone in the house, just study all day to achieve good results for their parent’s expectation. Money is to solve her problems.
As you can see a portrait of her family happily together, but now they are separating.
why china notes? because she is from China, and she is wearing the national primary school uniform.
progress: very challenging. to combine the girl with different limbs.